HIROAKI, vanitas kurama

[Vanitas Hiroaki]

Vanitas Kurama Hiroaki


Today was a fairytale, you were the prince

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I used to be a damsel in distress[/font][/color]
Today was a fairytale[/color] [/center]


Name[/color]: Vanitas Kurama Hiroaki
Age[/color]: 18
Grade[/color]: 1st Year
Gender[/color]: Male
Sexual Orientation[/color]: Straight
Face Claim[/color]: Vanitas ~ KH:BBS
Canon or Original[/color]: Canon

Today was a fairytale, I wore a dress

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You wore a dark gray t-shirt[/font][/color]
You told me I was pretty when I looked like a mess[/color] [/center]

Height:[/color] 5’7”
Weight:[/color] 130lbs
Eyes:[/color] Yellow
Hair:[/color]Black
Scars/Tattoos/Other Markings:[/color] He has a gold earring on his left ear.
Summary: [/color]

Vanitas looks very close to his brother Sora. The main difference between the two is their Hair color and Eye color. While Sora has brown hair Vanitas has black hair and while Sora has blue eyes Vanitas has yellow eyes. If you compare their aura to each other you could even sense something completely one being of pure innocence and one being of not innocent at all. Vanitas has a style that matches his personality often wearing clothes that are dark, but fashionable just to make him seem a bit nicer than he really is.

You've got a smile that takes me to another planet

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Every move you make, everything you say is right[/font][/color]
Today was a fairytale[/color] [/center]

Likes:[/color] Playing games, His Daughter, His Wife, Getting back at people, Torturing his brother
Dislikes: [/color] Seeing his brother happy, Doing anything without a reason, People talking about him, Oblivious people, His Brother
Strengths:[/color] Torturing his brother, Strength
Weaknesses:[/color] Babies, His Wife
Personality:[/color]

Vanitas grew up as a bad child so it was only natural for him to stay that way. He is mischievous in all forms of way. He loves to torture people, but mostly his brother everyone else gets a kind of torture that is somewhat an extreme prank on them. He has a deep hate for his brother as he envies the life that he had even though he known nothing about the bad things that happened in Sora's life. All Vanitas wanted was to live as happy and free as his brother, but no he lived a sheltered life and one full of abuse and agony. He vowed at a very young age that he would do whatever he could to cause as much pain to his brother as he had to undergo.

Putting aside his hate for his brother Vanitas isn’t all that bad of a person sure he can be a little mischievous around everyone else, but that’s just how he is. Most people come to accept that and eventually get used to it. Around his friends he is more of the defender of the group making sure no harm comes to them and if harm should come to them he swears to beat whoever hurt them to a bloody pulp. He cares for his friends in a manner that doesn’t seem like possible maybe it’s because he is a father and he treats his friends just like if they were his children.

Take him away from social areas and Vanitas’s personality really changes around his son he acts like a regular father who cares for his child. He spends time caring and playing with the baby he and his wife gave birth to. Speaking of wife he is also very kind and caring to his wife. Their marriage may have been forged on their individual hates for certain people [Izure and Sora] and their child born under the fact her parents didn’t want her to be lesbian, but they figured out a way to make them both happy and their parents.

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[atrb=cellSpacing,20,true][atrb=border,0,true][cs=2] Kingdom University [atrb=style, background: #C0c0c0; width: 360px; border: 1px solid #000000, bTable]
	Name: Vanitas Kurama Hiroaki Age: 18 Grade Level: 1st Year Residence:

All that I can say is that it's getting so much clearer

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Nothing made sense until the time I saw your face[/font][/color]
Today was a fairytale[/color] [/center]

Mother:[/color] Aoko Ran Hiroaki, 39, [Birth Mother]
Daini Okami Hiroaki, 33 [Adopted Mother]
Father:[/color] Hideki Issun Hiroaki, 48
Siblings:[/color] Sora Yosuke Hiroaki, 18
Spouse:[/color] Netami Ikeike Hiroaki , 19
Children:[/color] Konbo Kirai Hiroaki , 1
History: [/color]

Vanitas was born not a few minutes before his twin brother Sora. For the first year of their lives they looked completely identical and no one could tell the difference between the two, but as their personalities began to form Vanitas’s appearance decided to change too. His hair grew in black replacing the brown strand that used to exist and his eyes seemed to change into a yellow almost catlike color. This made him look like a crazy kid as if he were to be growing up into a maniac and this worried his mother. As his personality formed though that is when she became really scarred. She saw signs of someone who mihgt cause harm to her other son so she quickly hid him from the world keeping everyone unaware of his birth the only ones that knew were her husband and the doctors. Eventually as the boys got older she decided she couldn’t care for two children and gave Vanitas to one of her brother in laws.

His life wasn’t treated any better though as Vanitas grew up abused and tortured as that brother had a drinking problem. He was tortured and he didn’t live a much happy life till he was about ten. His father had come to pick him up and take him to a better home. He was happy to see his father, but not so happy to see where he ended up going. Instead of going back to his old home with his brother his father got a new wife and Vanitas would have to live with this strange and unfamiliar woman. Then again at the time Vanitas didn't know who his real mother was until he was older. He gave the woman a chance though and grew up by her guidance, but she wasn’t the best influence. She grew up with rage and jealousy as a child and ended up feeding Vanitas’s fire for his brother even more. He had learned about his mother and brother though his adopted mother and his father. It seemed like they would talk about them more often then most conversations. His father would talk about how horrible a wife she was (even though she wasn't) and his adopted mother would talk about how that woman was so careless of a mother to give her own son away even if it was to family. This shocked Vanitas as he thought this was his family, but in truth his family was someone else who seemed to never care for him. He never found out who the woman was as his parents never said her name, but he did hear about his brother from them. It was around his twelfth birthday that he vowed to get revenge someday on the crimes his mother had committed and she was going to pay Vanitas with the tears and possibly blood of her son Sora. His hate had been growing for years and even though he knew nothing of Sora's life he assumed it was a better and comforting one then what he had.

When Vanitas entered high school he seemed to attract a lot of attention from the female crowd, but they seemed to annoy him more than excite him. He wasn’t really looking for a relationship he was still concentrating on his desire to torture his brother if he ever saw him. While in high school he meet a girl a little older than him she had the same aura he had of hate for someone who caused them pain and suffering. Vanitas approached the girl and discovered the name of the person was a girl named Izure. Apparently Izure was a classmate of hers and her sweet innocent demure took all the attention leaving her in the dust. Netami was envious of Izure and Vanitas liked her for it so they decided to work together to help them destroy Izure and Sora’s reputation and make them pay. Around when Vanitas was seventeen Netami’s parents kept hunting her down for not bearing them any children and to find a husband so they could have grandchildren. This made her mad as she had a girlfriend and her parents didn’t accept it so Vanitas made a proposition with her. They get married and have a baby together so they can not only get her parents off her back, but have another reason to torture Izure and Sora. So they did get married with the consent of her girlfriend and had a baby boy who they named Konbo. Netami’s parents were pleased and left her alone so the two continued their time in high school with their baby at home being cared for by her parents. Eventually the two found out that both Izure and Sora were going to end up in the same college so they both applied and with a few loans made it into the same school where they could finally take down those who caused them pain.

Time slows down whenever you're around

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I can feel my heart, it's beating in my chest[/font][/color]
Did you feel it?[/color] [/center]

Your Name:[/color] Leon
How Did You Find Us?[/color] Jade
Play Any Other Characters?[/color] Tore-n, Kousa, Lenne
Contact Info:[/color] PM

But can you feel this magic in the air?

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It must've been the way you kissed me[/font][/color]
Fell in love when I saw you standing there[/color] [/center]

Character application created by JADE of FD and KU.

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[JADEYKINS]

Almost there! A few things seemed a little off in your application, I'll list them below:

[/b], but fashionable just to hide his true nature a bit better.[/quote]
[li]The way you described him makes him sound like he's got a 'dark' personality, right? Since he's the opposite of Sora. Well, this conflicts--wearing dark clothing to hide his true intentions? What are those intentions? And how does wearing dark clothing mask his DARK personality?

He has a deep hate for his brother as he envies the life that he had

[/li][li]Okay, yes Sora did have a somewhat 'free' life I guess you could say since he grew up on the islands and all--but his childhood wasn't all that great. His dad cheated on his mom and then LEFT him and his mom for his mistress. Sora was very young when this happened and he remembers seeing his mother cry every night and day and basically having to always be there for her to make her feel better. That's why he got into sports, because his home life was so depressing.
So Sora really didn't have all that great of a life, certainly nothing to be envious over.

His hair grew in black replacing the brown strand that used to exist and his eyes seemed to change into a yellow almost catlike color. This made him look like a crazy kid as if he were to be growing up into a maniac and this scared his mother. She quickly hid him from the world keeping everyone unaware of his birth the only ones that knew were her husband and the doctors.

[/li][li]This doesn't seem very likely. Why would she be scared? The first year of the baby's life is when everything changes. Almost everyone is born with blue eyes but over the weeks/months after birth their eye color changes to whatever it's going to be for the rest of it's life. I can't really imagine a mother being frightened because her baby's hair and eye color changed the first year of his life.

It was around his twelfth birthday that he vowed to get revenge someday on the crimes his brother had committed and he was going to pay Vanitas even if he didn’t want to.

[/li][li]I know Vanitas is a vengeful person but can you just explain more why he hates Sora so much? Sora was just a baby when their mother gave Vanitas up so it's not like Sora even knew what was happening or even had a conscious recollection of these events. And how does Vanitas even know about Sora? Or did the man he lived with ever mention to him who his real family was?
[/li][li]Also, you can't mention characters such as Kairi and Namine in your history unless you either play them or know the person who does because it conflicts with their history. And you can't make a random relative to a canon like, Netami. You can switch out Kairi and Namine's names for different names [and make them into your own character rather than using someone elses characters without their permission].

[/li][li]You also wrote that he Tortures people but then in the personality you said But he's really not that bad of a guy well that's a little conflicting. If you go out of your way to torture someone then you are a bad person. Good people don't just go around torturing/hurting people.[/li][/ul]

Sorry it seems like a lot, but I think that everything that I mentioned is very important so just fix those up, and you'll be good to go![/size][/center]

[Vanitas Hiroaki]

how is this?

[JADEYKINS]

Almost there! A few things seemed a little off in your application, I'll list them below:
I have a couple problems with this ap still but I decided to go easy on you so I'll just give you one of them.

• Since Vanitas and Sora would've been...like...a few months-1 year old when their mother gave Vanitas up I'd like to know how he knew about Sora and his mother. How did he know that the man he had lived with wasn't his father? Because he definitely would not have remembered Sora or his mother because he was so young and children don't start retaining memories until roughly age 2+.

Just fix those up, and you'll be good to go!

[Vanitas Hiroaki]

that was actually a bit difficult to explain, but I think I got it.

[JADEYKINS]

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