KYOUJU, retsu kenbu

[Retsu Kyouju]

RetsuKenbuKyouju


Today was a fairytale, you were the prince

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I used to be a damsel in distress[/font][/color]
Today was a fairytale[/color] [/center]


Name[/color]: Retsu Kenbu Kyouju
Age[/color]: 29
Grade[/color]: Professor (Music)
Gender[/color]: Female
Sexual Orientation[/color]: Straight
Face Claim[/color]: Juvia ~ Fairy Tail
Canon or Original[/color]: Original

Today was a fairytale, I wore a dress

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You wore a dark gray t-shirt[/font][/color]
You told me I was pretty when I looked like a mess[/color] [/center]

Height:[/color] 5’8”
Weight:[/color] 130 lbs
Eyes:[/color] Dark Blue
Hair:[/color] Blue
Scars/Tattoos/Other Markings:[/color] None
Summary: [/color]

Retsu has a very distinct look. She has a very unnatural hair color that makes her stick out like a sore thumb in a crowd. Retsu loves her hair though and she doesn't care what other people think of it. Her face is very beautiful, but she has been told she gives off a very cold look when she talks to people. She has very strong eyes that seem to pierce the soul of people. She doesn't try to be intimidating sometimes, but her eyes seem to make people scared. Her body is easily described as cold and that just fits her perfectly.

You've got a smile that takes me to another planet

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Every move you make, everything you say is right[/font][/color]
Today was a fairytale[/color] [/center]

Likes:[/color] Sports, Following the Rules, Being Strict, Animals, Coffee
Dislikes: [/color] Misbehavior, Tardy people, Loud people, pranking, Lazy People.
Strengths:[/color] Strict and precise
Weaknesses:[/color] Easily angered and Forceful
Personality:[/color]

Retsu is a strong and demanding woman. To her students she is strict and won’t accept anything but the best from them. From her colleagues she expects fairness and discipline.Retsu is a woman who takes her job seriously and won’t do anything to compromise it. A fair and impartial person she isn’t taken aback by students misbehaving or trying to make fun of her, she isn’t tolerable of this behavior though and will easily kick a student out of her class without warning. She does the same with her colleagues if they interrupt her class she will throw them out as quickly as possible and continue on with her lesson.

If she is outside her classroom and relaxing she is a clam person and is [hopefully] a fun person to be around. She is willing to go out and party with a few friends and have a drink, but nothing more. She is usually the one who is forced to drive her friends or colleagues home which she doesn’t mind until they bother her then she gets annoyed by them. She may be uptight most of the time, but she is willing to let that go when she knows she is allowed to have fun or not going to be teaching the next day.

SCHOOL ID:[/color]

All that I can say is that it's getting so much clearer

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Nothing made sense until the time I saw your face[/font][/color]
Today was a fairytale[/color] [/center]

Mother:[/color] Aisu Shimo Kyouju
Father:[/color] Yuki Arashi Kyouju
Siblings:[/color] Touketsu Mizu Kyouju
History: [/color]

Retsu’s parents both went to the same school as kids and they were practically normal. Her mother was the brains of the relationship often studying very often as a child while her father was the sports fan often playing many sports. They eventually fell in love and got married. About two months into their marriage Retsu’s father got recruited to a sports team in a far off land, but he didn’t want to leave his newly pregnant wife alone. She was a caring woman though and let him accomplish his dreams even if they would be apart for a long time. The two still kept communicating with each other long after his departure, but the house was always empty that is until Retsu was born.

Retsu lived a normal life growing up like many other children and eventually ended up with a brother under a different last name. Apparently her mother took had an affair while her husband was away and gave birth to Retsu's brother. Despite this the children seemed to get along, even though Touketsu did annoy Retsu while she was young. She eventually went to school paying her own way there and eventually grew up.

Time slows down whenever you're around

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I can feel my heart, it's beating in my chest[/font][/color]
Did you feel it?[/color] [/center]

Your Name:[/color] Leon
How Did You Find Us?[/color] Jade
Play Any Other Characters?[/color] Tore-n, Kousa, Lenne, Vanitas
Contact Info:[/color] PM or Chatbox

But can you feel this magic in the air?

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It must've been the way you kissed me[/font][/color]
Fell in love when I saw you standing there[/color] [/center]

Character application created by JADE of FD and KU.

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[JADEYKINS]

Almost there! A few things seemed a little off in your application, I'll list them below:

Her eyes make people feel like she is stabbing daggers though their body with how intense her eyes are

• This is poorly worded, and your grammar isn't any better. I'd consider rewriting this sentence or taking it out completely.
  
• Actually, after reading her entire appearance paragraph. Could you please just rewrite the entire thing? There's just too many mistakes and how you worded a lot of things doesn't make...well, it just doesn't make very much sense. You're missing punctuation marks, you've mispelled words, and your grammar is all over the place.
  
• I'm not going to make you rewrite her Personality paragraphs--but please proofread them. There are a ton of punctuation, spelling, and grammatical errors that I'd really like to see fixed before I accept this.
  

  Apparently her mother took a found of another man while her husband was away.

  
  
• That sentence should be cleaned up a bit, it doesn't make much sense to me.
  

  Despite this the children seemed to get along even though Touketsu did annoy Retsu while she was young.

  
  
• This should probably say something like, "Despite this, the children seem to get along, though Touketsu occasionally annoyed Retsu, but they were young and their fights were never serious". Not exactly that, it should be in your own words. But you get what I mean, right?

Just fix those up, and you'll be good to go!

[Retsu Kyouju]

Fixed

[JADEYKINS]

I didn't see this before, but Keiran pointed it out to me.
You never listed what classes she teaches in the correct spot.

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[Retsu Kyouju]

there we go fixed

[JADEYKINS]

So is she teaching all of the music classes then...?

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[Retsu Kyouju]

yes. I have a new plan for teaching the classes now.

[GIA]

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